Ugly? Gosh, if you seriously think this is ugly I can't imagine what you would call my art...
Seriously my art is so horrible that you would probably die just by looking at it.
It's so gorgeous!
And a lineart like this would be lovely, I would definitely use it!
Bahh when are you going to be happy with your works? There is nothign wrong with this, looks awesome to me. ♥
What kind of Method did you use for the shading ? Some kind of cell shading? If it is, then omg